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Old 04-25-2007, 05:44 PM   #1
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Poems by Santabot

Criticism is open, but please don't come here if you want to argue, this is about the only topic I don't really want it in, comment on the work itself and not related to me, thank you!

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F*ck off!


Lost in a vast sea of invented grave ideas,
Which is yours to decide, and tell me who am I?
Experts tell only lies, their agenda is best kept from our eyes,
Can't you tell my emotion? Or shall I remove my disguise?

If you were to make grounds, a new discovery,
Avert your gaze from those rambling, in poverty.
Surely there's no sense to their uneducated words,
While the media asserts baseless claims and the unsolved
murders.

The key to the door is under the false welcome mat,
Your dreams are next to the eight ball, hiding under the hat;
Hopping frantically away, over the border and out of sight,
As the unknown devil devours your children's minds at night.

Laws and regulations printed by obfuscating linguists,
Fresh off the mill, made by Mother Nature's ignorant rapist.
The only freedoms you've got are granted by Miranda,
Eschew the media sources, it's still propaganda.

Make your precious, uneducated vote, and make it quick,
Your time spent at work is measured only by the clock's tick.
You've got a grip of countless, worthless dollar bills,
All you need is a government tag to get your cheap thrills.

Make your choice, consider all of your options,
There's new devices of all kinds, from clocks to watches.
We've been branded the same, from top hat to bell bottom,
No matter your selection, you're still persona non grata.

Pick and choose your vices, they're a rare commodity,
Nobody has them, of course, but the divine non-profit agency.
I'll read the books that I believe suit me best,
Just, please, get off my ****ing chest.

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Don't Give Them Up


Life and race run parallel ventures,
One moves forward, the other never progresses;
People may change their views, most just double-crossing,
Hiding under their bedsheets, insecurity covered in frosting.
The sugary goodness the government churns out for you,
Leaving only a task for physicians to undo.
Unbuckle your saddle, your cheap chastity belt,
Wimper as the government ****s you, or just slowly melt.
There's only one road to the top, paved in priceless gold,
The one way to traverse it, is to abandon your soul.
Don't give up your seemingly hopeless pursuits,
Take life for a free fall and die, or use your parachute.

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Idolized


Donít you realize the lies under the guise once prophesized?
Engrossed is the size of the eyes of these spies lurking in
the antagonizing crypt of eternal demise.
You must surmise youíve been hypnotized by the lies of these
shadowy guys,
Nigh are the times that heíll try to rise above your ability
to criticize,
Inept to combat the foes who amortize your means to monetize
yourself and bastardize their means to devitalize.
Analyze the situation before youíre crystallized in a
commercialized attempt to decriminalize the lies under the
colonized effort to centralize.
Mortify the fake prize being empathized by dogmaticized
euthanizers and exorcize these idolized fools to harmonize
our need for institutionalized guides to live by.
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Old 04-26-2007, 09:10 PM   #2
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You did say you wrote these right? I found them to be both intriguing and disturbing. You are talented. Ever consider going into a creative writing field?
Of course chemical engineering does pay much better....unless you write a best seller!
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You did say you wrote these right? I found them to be both intriguing and disturbing. You are talented. Ever consider going into a creative writing field?
Of course chemical engineering does pay much better....unless you write a best seller!
I plan on (and am currently in the brainstorming process) of writing my own autobiography (way along the road, just a goal I hope to set to record a lot of my life in a specific manner) and most likely some other books of various topics.

As I said before, I hope to get a degree in chemical engineering, and later law, philosophy, literature, and others. I wish I could spend a lot of my life around schools, they're the best place to me.
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Do you perhaps go to Caddo Magnet? Just wondering...
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Do you perhaps go to Caddo Magnet? Just wondering...
Why? I've had multiple people ask me that, but I'm just wondering why people would need to know, because as much information as I've given out already, giving out my school or any other information would probably lead to people being dumb. I never said I went to magnet, I just said I went to a good school here, and I won't indicate which just for privacy reasons, for now.
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